I had not intended to do any editing right now. I was stuck on describing this character and thanks to Simon and now you, I have some good insights on how to describe scenes and people. Also this discussion has sparked a bit of creative conundrum. I was going to make her role a throw a away role. Now however I kind of want her to participate a bit in the story. So while she may not be a main character she may stay as a secondary character. All of this is just food for thought right now, as I am only writing one paragraph at a time. Only one scene at a time. What I have sketched out as the overall arch may in fact end up scrapped by the time I am done. Which to be honest I am ok with.