14 Bars each for round 1? Cool. When I drop my curse with this terse verse this cat just +falls+ like Niagra You can't test, you wouldn't be hard if you ingested a whole case of Viagra So Scarlet's gonna show you, lyrically mow you, see you get chopped to bits You're just bait, you couldn't formulate a decent flow clutching a cow's **** I got hot punch lines to move you from fever to seisure, here's the true wager Your track's wack- you couldn't +punch - lines+ in a fist fight with ruled paper I'm the Don and that's true. You Sonshu? Well I'll just tell ya: son, shoo! Your rhymes immature, we different in stature like Yogi and Boo Boo You're just dead weight, but I won't hesitate to embarass your carcass Scarlet's always on top, mop the floor with Sonshu from London to Caracas And I'm still chewin' emcees, but this cat is just to snack it I'm done with your ass, you're like a dull cutlass, you just can't hack it Rest in Pieces
Oh god I got the fundamental – lyrical messiah with da essentials. Let it be known your styles gone, dis is my song, step up your finished & dead wrong. Scarlet’s styles weak, turn the other cheek and you’ll get knocked out like a kick from Ron Van Clief. Let it be known I’m the hottest white rapper since Emenem, the biggest balls in hip hop you lady’s been feelin em. My rhymes are immature? Listen up Jamaica I’m just opening up the door, this is hardcore leaving bodies all over your floor. All the commentators in the world gather round, listen to the sound of the Sonshu get down, pound for pound it’s a 1st round knockout, your lucks out, you got taken out………Lights out.
Freestyling over the internet is about as lame as it gets fellas. If you're gonna do it, record it and host it somewhere. BTW - Remember to keep the content clean - just because you're "rapping" it doesn't mean you're exempt from the rules.
Rapping on the net is ok - about as lame as posting about martial arts is! Also mine is pretty clean so i'm in the clear. Just waiting for the reply from Scarlet.
Round 2 Yo, yow, yow Scarlet's steppin' on the rest, still crushin when round 2 starts Verses go directly to the left of your chest, to make sure you take it to"heart" I got skills like that, my quill's on fire, Sonshu couldn't write that Scarlet's mind will crush his spine, Sonshu knows I gotta fight "back" In ten seconds, I reckon this battle's gonna be over After I quickly brush this cat off like hair on my shoulder His verse is lyrical treason, he's got neither rhyme nor reason Scarlet was makin' it hot like summer and he had to change seasons I'm breezin' through this freestyle and Sonshu still hits the deck hard He calls his style free because he couldn't sell a record You don't believe me? Please His CD's only got "air play" when kids couldn't find their frisbees aha!
better, but a little advice. you take too long to rhyme so it kind of takes away from the effect cause the counterpart word was too far back. also, not enough ryhming as a whole, i mean its fluid and all, just a little bland.
OBVIOUSLY you have no experience in judging rhyming skills. Feel the rhythm, put the lime in the coconut.
i never asked what it was. the guy said that you were more intense, and i simply was stating that your song(or whatever) was more humorous than "intense". but maybe im wrong. perhaps it was too "hard"(hehe) for me to understand.
Well if that's your opinion then don't read the thread. We're having fun, what's the problem. Jeez, who took the lime out of your coconut?
I have to give 1st and 2nd round to my man Scarlet. Sonshu last chance to drop yo bomb LETS GOOOOOOOOOoooo!!!!
Brilliant Scarlet, plain brilliant. Heres mine: Scarlet and Sonshu are ***** They cant rap, couldnt even fly a kite