Scarlet Mist vs Sonshu Rappers Delight

[Sonshu]

You have the floor kid!

Round 1

[Scarlet Mist]

14 Bars each for round 1? Cool.

When I drop my curse with this terse verse this cat just +falls+ like Niagra
You can't test, you wouldn't be hard if you ingested a whole case of Viagra
So Scarlet's gonna show you, lyrically mow you, see you get chopped to bits
You're just bait, you couldn't formulate a decent flow clutching a cow's tits
I got hot punch lines to move you from fever to seisure, here's the true wager
Your track's wack- you couldn't +punch - lines+ in a fist fight with ruled paper
I'm the Don and that's true. You Sonshu? Well I'll just tell ya: son, shoo!
Your rhymes immature, we different in stature like Yogi and Boo Boo
You're just dead weight, but I won't hesitate to embarass your carcass
Scarlet's always on top, mop the floor with Sonshu from London to Caracas
And I'm still chewin' emcees, but this cat is just to snack it
I'm done with your ass, you're like a dull cutlass, you just can't hack it

Rest in Pieces :cool: :D

[Sonshu]

Nice - not much of a bar rapper but check this kid!

[Sonshu]

Oh god I got the fundamental – lyrical messiah with da essentials.
Let it be known your styles gone, dis is my song, step up your finished & dead wrong.
Scarlet’s styles weak, turn the other cheek and you’ll get knocked out like a kick from Ron Van Clief.

Let it be known I’m the hottest white rapper since Emenem, the biggest balls in hip hop you lady’s been feelin em.

My rhymes are immature? Listen up Jamaica I’m just opening up the door, this is hardcore leaving bodies all over your floor.

All the commentators in the world gather round, listen to the sound of the Sonshu get down, pound for pound it’s a 1st round knockout, your lucks out, you got taken out………Lights out.

[Twelve Eggs]

werd

[tekkengod]

round 1 goes to Sonshu.

[Twelve Eggs]

agreed.


p.s. sonshu....SONNED!!!!

[Ad McG]

Freestyling over the internet is about as lame as it gets fellas. If you're gonna do it, record it and host it somewhere.

BTW - Remember to keep the content clean - just because you're "rapping" it doesn't mean you're exempt from the rules.

[Sonshu]

Rapping on the net is ok - about as lame as posting about martial arts is!

Also mine is pretty clean so i'm in the clear. Just waiting for the reply from Scarlet.

[Nrv4evr]

I gotta give that one to Sonshu, but Scarlet's was more intense. :cool:

[Twelve Eggs]

about as intense as "you wont be hard if you ingest a whole case of viagra" gets...

[Scarlet Mist]

about as intense as "you wont be hard if you ingest a whole case of viagra" gets...


It's called a Punch Line, with wordplay. Maybe the concept is just to "hard" for you to grasp.

[Scarlet Mist]

Round 2

Yo, yow, yow

Scarlet's steppin' on the rest, still crushin when round 2 starts
Verses go directly to the left of your chest, to make sure you take it to"heart"
I got skills like that, my quill's on fire, Sonshu couldn't write that
Scarlet's mind will crush his spine, Sonshu knows I gotta fight "back"
In ten seconds, I reckon this battle's gonna be over
After I quickly brush this cat off like hair on my shoulder
His verse is lyrical treason, he's got neither rhyme nor reason
Scarlet was makin' it hot like summer and he had to change seasons
I'm breezin' through this freestyle and Sonshu still hits the deck hard
He calls his style free because he couldn't sell a record
You don't believe me? Please
His CD's only got "air play" when kids couldn't find their frisbees

aha!

[tekkengod]

better, but a little advice. you take too long to rhyme so it kind of takes away from the effect cause the counterpart word was too far back. also, not enough ryhming as a whole, i mean its fluid and all, just a little bland.

[Scarlet Mist]

better, but a little advice. you take too long to rhyme so it kind of takes away from the effect cause the counterpart word was too far back. also, not enough ryhming as a whole, i mean its fluid and all, just a little bland.

OBVIOUSLY you have no experience in judging rhyming skills.
Feel the rhythm, put the lime in the coconut.

[Twelve Eggs]

It's called a Punch Line, with wordplay. Maybe the concept is just to "hard" for you to grasp.

i never asked what it was. the guy said that you were more intense, and i simply was stating that your song(or whatever) was more humorous than "intense". but maybe im wrong. perhaps it was too "hard"(hehe) for me to understand.

[Scarlet Mist]

Freestyling over the internet is about as lame as it gets fellas. If you're gonna do it, record it and host it somewhere.

BTW - Remember to keep the content clean - just because you're "rapping" it doesn't mean you're exempt from the rules.

Well if that's your opinion then don't read the thread. We're having fun, what's the problem.
Jeez, who took the lime out of your coconut? :rolleyes:

[JKD_forever]

I have to give 1st and 2nd round to my man Scarlet.
Sonshu last chance to drop yo bomb
LETS GOOOOOOOOOoooo!!!!

[NaughtyKnight]

Brilliant Scarlet, plain brilliant.

Heres mine:

Scarlet and Sonshu are *****
They cant rap, couldnt even fly a kite

:D

[Twelve Eggs]

kn heres lookin to incite a fight. that aint tight. *looks at skin. damn im white*

[NaughtyKnight]

kn heres lookin to incite a fight. that aint tight. *looks at skin. damn im white*

Rofl nice work.

How bout we all put together and make a rap cd. The money goes towards making MAP even bigger. That and getting me some private lessons with my TKD master. :D

[Thomas]

I hope this ends up lile the "Rap-off"s in the WWE... with Sonshu blasting Scarlet with a steel chair and then putting some nasty submission on his bleeding body! (I know... then Scarlet would have to win the re-match at the next Pay-per-view)

[shotokanwarrior]

Scarlet is better. He's more creative and more articulate, I think.

*leans over the ropes and gives Scarlet some water*

Now, go get him!!!!!!!!!